Pros and cons are down below) Check my vid here (likes and subs are highly appreciated)):
1. The subtle scares were so good! The chair scare, the noises, and even the jumpscare - I enjoyed every part of the adventure. Jumpscare was a bit cheap, tho, but I still liked it a lot. It scared me and gave me chills so I believe that this game is a good horror game.
2. Tho lore was so cool. I was so happy to play a lore-heavy game. It was very fun. I appreciate the effort that was put into creating this story, I liked it a lot, it was very creepy!
1. The notes were really obnoxious, honestly. I mean, I know that you've changed them a bit cuz before there was no option for reading the text pressing RM. But still, it's so counterintuitive that you can scroll even tho there's a tip on the top. IT feels like you can scroll the note, not the text that appears after pressing RM. And also there were so many mistakes. Normally, I don't care about them as I'm also not native and I make a ton myself. But these notes had an overwhelming amount of mistakes even for my liking.
2. The phone calls were too quiet and the dialogues were a bit weird. Like too very shy people are talking so they make lots of very awkward pauses. I don't know. I actually feel kinda bad neat picking at this because I feel that I wouldn't enjoy the game as much if there wouldn't be lore like this. Still, I feel that there is room for improvement.
I rate this game 4.5 psychos / 5 (5 officially). It was a great game but there are still some places that could have been improved further. Anyway, can't wait for more games from you, amazing job!
Hope my feedback was useful!